Travel guide of Hong Kong and Hotels reservation

On Feb 20, 8:51 pm, ChrisKS <ksi....TakeThisOut@hotmail.com> wrote:
> I just made a web site for who would like to visit Hong Kong, include
> travel guide, hotel reservation.http://www.destinationhongkongonline.com

There's a lot of travel sites out there about Hong Kong. It's not easy
to establish a unique selling point. Your site appears to be written
in gibberish, which is pretty much a recipe for failure. Example:

Hong Kong is a dynamic city
I guess no one remember that Hong Kong is just a small fish village
long times ago, peoples fish for living and simple life. After time
gone and factors of political, she became an international city and a
international financial center just like Lodon(UK) and New York(US).
Over 7 million population in sized 1,104 km2 land, contains a number
of Europeans, Americans, Australians, Canadians, Japanese, Koreans
and ...etc., living and working in Hong Kong.


You need to fix it.

Cheers,
George W Russell
Bangalore